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“No. No. Thank you Kakaii-sensei. You’re being so nice to me…Thank you,” she said with a warm smile.


“Yes Kakaii-sensei?”

“How many times have I told you to call me Kakashi”

“Sorry Kakaii, er, Kakashi.”

Silence came over us again as we hugged each other. The sun was beginning to set and the air had become colder. Her crying had ceased and she had relaxed a little bit. She looked so elegant against the pink and orange sky, it was almost unbearable. I suddenly felt the need to kiss her, to become closer to her.

Hesitantly I asked, “Sakura…Can you let me do something?”

“It depends… What do you want to do?”

“C-can I kiss you?”

“…K-kiss me?”



I gently pulled down my mask as a smile appeared on my face. She gasped and blushed when she saw my true face which caused my smile to twist into a smirk.

I leaned forward and carefully pressed my lips against hers. She jumped slightly but then closed her eyes and opened her mouth a little. Instinct took over and I took advantage of the moment. My tongue wandered into her mouth and massaged hers which caused Sakura to jump once again. Instead of pulling back like I thought she would, she ordered her tongue to rub against mine.

Her arms wrapped around my neck and her fingers became intertwined in my hair. She was enjoying this? I had to admit that I was shocked that Sakura was so willing to make-out with a guy that was fourteen years older than her, but I didn’t complain.

We stood there for several minutes, clashing our lips together and ordering our tongues to continue their violent tango. That’s when I felt someone’s gaze penetrating through us. I knew Sakura felt it too because she shifted uncomfortably.

Sakura’s Watcher  POV

He was dead, I had finally destroyed him. And I had returned. Permanently? Maybe. I was here to find a wife and Sakura was the one I would marry. I knew that she’d give herself to me in the blink of an eye if I asked her to. I knew that no matter what she said or did, she still loved me.

I glanced around for a minute and when I turned back to Sakura, she was snogging Kakashi. That Hatake! Who de he think he was!? Making out with my fiancé like that… It was despicable! I narrowed my eyes as they broke apart and then I disappeared as they looked my way. Sakura was going to be mine… No matter what…
Kakashi and Sakura © Masashi Kishimoto
Story and Preview Image © Liv ~livxuponxhope :iconlivxuponxhope:

Her's chapter 8! It's short but that's because I wanted to end it on a cliff hanger. XD

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BBQCharizard Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
xXcookies898Xx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... DESPICABLE ME 8D sorry first thing that came to mind when i was done reading
livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
I LOVE that Film so much!
xXcookies898Xx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
me too
skye1911255 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
why does it say Sakura’s Watcher P.O.V and not Sakura’s stalker POV?
livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
because i felt like it
skye1911255 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
good enough cause your story is awesome.
insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
This decides it. KakaSaku PWNS NaruSaku! ^^
And I literally had a proper laughing spazz when Sasuke said "That Hatake! Who de he think he was!? Making out with my fiancé like that..."
I dont belive Sakura KNOWS shes your fiancé, Sasuke. :P
And the kiss? A work of art. :heart:
livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
Well I believe it does. NaruSaku is like BrotherxSister in my eyes, which is gross.

Well in all actuality I'm Sasuke's Fiance so sakura can go back off XD

Thank you! :D
insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Hmm... i see your viewpoint... :/
I dont like NejiHina for that reason. There bloody cousins!!! 0-0
80 YOU are Sasukes fiance!! 0.o
Oh, thats good, Sakura can now have Kakashi. :3
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