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“No. No. Thank you Kakaii-sensei. You’re being so nice to me…Thank you,” she said with a warm smile.

“Sakura?”

“Yes Kakaii-sensei?”

“How many times have I told you to call me Kakashi”

“Sorry Kakaii, er, Kakashi.”

Silence came over us again as we hugged each other. The sun was beginning to set and the air had become colder. Her crying had ceased and she had relaxed a little bit. She looked so elegant against the pink and orange sky, it was almost unbearable. I suddenly felt the need to kiss her, to become closer to her.

Hesitantly I asked, “Sakura…Can you let me do something?”

“It depends… What do you want to do?”

“C-can I kiss you?”

“…K-kiss me?”

“Yes…Please?”

“Uh…Sure.”

I gently pulled down my mask as a smile appeared on my face. She gasped and blushed when she saw my true face which caused my smile to twist into a smirk.

I leaned forward and carefully pressed my lips against hers. She jumped slightly but then closed her eyes and opened her mouth a little. Instinct took over and I took advantage of the moment. My tongue wandered into her mouth and massaged hers which caused Sakura to jump once again. Instead of pulling back like I thought she would, she ordered her tongue to rub against mine.

Her arms wrapped around my neck and her fingers became intertwined in my hair. She was enjoying this? I had to admit that I was shocked that Sakura was so willing to make-out with a guy that was fourteen years older than her, but I didn’t complain.

We stood there for several minutes, clashing our lips together and ordering our tongues to continue their violent tango. That’s when I felt someone’s gaze penetrating through us. I knew Sakura felt it too because she shifted uncomfortably.

Sakura’s Watcher  POV

He was dead, I had finally destroyed him. And I had returned. Permanently? Maybe. I was here to find a wife and Sakura was the one I would marry. I knew that she’d give herself to me in the blink of an eye if I asked her to. I knew that no matter what she said or did, she still loved me.

I glanced around for a minute and when I turned back to Sakura, she was snogging Kakashi. That Hatake! Who de he think he was!? Making out with my fiancé like that… It was despicable! I narrowed my eyes as they broke apart and then I disappeared as they looked my way. Sakura was going to be mine… No matter what…
Kakashi and Sakura © Masashi Kishimoto
Story and Preview Image © Liv ~livxuponxhope :iconlivxuponxhope:

Her's chapter 8! It's short but that's because I wanted to end it on a cliff hanger. XD

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BBQCharizard Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
FUCK YOU SASUKE! NO! BE GONE! LEAAVE MY PRESENCE!!
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xXcookies898Xx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... DESPICABLE ME 8D sorry first thing that came to mind when i was done reading
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
I LOVE that Film so much!
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xXcookies898Xx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
me too
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skye1911255 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
why does it say Sakura’s Watcher P.O.V and not Sakura’s stalker POV?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
because i felt like it
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skye1911255 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
good enough cause your story is awesome.
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insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
This decides it. KakaSaku PWNS NaruSaku! ^^
And I literally had a proper laughing spazz when Sasuke said "That Hatake! Who de he think he was!? Making out with my fiancé like that..."
:D
I dont belive Sakura KNOWS shes your fiancé, Sasuke. :P
And the kiss? A work of art. :heart:
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
Well I believe it does. NaruSaku is like BrotherxSister in my eyes, which is gross.

Well in all actuality I'm Sasuke's Fiance so sakura can go back off XD

Thank you! :D
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insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Hmm... i see your viewpoint... :/
I dont like NejiHina for that reason. There bloody cousins!!! 0-0
80 YOU are Sasukes fiance!! 0.o
Oh, thats good, Sakura can now have Kakashi. :3
CAN I BE A BRIDESMAIDE!!??!!? *.*
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Haha NejiHina I don't mind as much. Throughout history people married their cousins to keep bloodlines pure and such, so that pairing i can understand a little and accept more. XD

Fo sho! You can wear a blue dress or something XD
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insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
Hmm... I see what you mean by that.... :/
I must ponder upon this.... :D

YEEYYY!!! BLUUUE!! ... dress. 0-0
Heh heh... yes. Dress... X.X
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
XD

Or a tux. whatever works
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insertmiddlename Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2009
YEEY!! ^^
I shall be the only girl in a tux!! XD
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2009
XD Great ^_^
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rosewhip42 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008
Awsomeenesss!~!!!!!!
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Piggyino13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
SASUKE IS THE WATCHER ISN'T HE! i bet he is. when's the next chap coming out?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
he is
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Piggyino13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
ha i knew it oh yeah! :boogie:
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deadheartshannan Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
hey do u have it on fanfiction?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
This story, yes. the new chapter, no.
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deadheartshannan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
darn, then u better write more!!
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
XD
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seleneswan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, love it!! write more soon!!!!!
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em0anime Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2008
I'm loving this when is the next coming out?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
no clue
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em0anime Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
please make it soon i want no need to read more:D :#1: :clap:
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hanspeterschmitz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
ooohhhhh my godess....sent mercy ...write more pppplllllzzzzzzz i love this couple
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
Thanks
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neolater-co-nr Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
Whens the next chappie coming, by the way I loved it!
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
Not exactly sure... Thank you!
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neolater-co-nr Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008
lol, no problem
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just-me14 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2007
looking forward for the next chapter!:)
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2007
Thank you
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just-me14 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2007
no problem!:D
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ANBUwarrior13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
have u any idea how long i was waiting for this!?!?!?!?!?!?!(i love it!!!^^)
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
Lol. Sorry. (Good, I'm glad)
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ANBUwarrior13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
Thats Ok!!!
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h3rshy675 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2007
u NEED to finish writing the story!!! plz? i bet that sasuke's the secret watcher isn't he?? :?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2007
I'm working on the story.

Yes. The amazing Uchiha Sasuke is the watcher.
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h3rshy675 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2007
awesome!! >< i cant wait!!
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AssassinTaurus14 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2007
U Need To Finish this CHAPTER!! It is awesome! I am coming to think that Sasuke is Sakura's Watcher....or is it?
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2007
I need to eh? XD

Thank you very much! Is Sasuke the watcher or is it Frodo Baggins? The world may never know!

Thanks for all those favorites!
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AssassinTaurus14 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
Ur Welcome!!! The story is very good, indeed and u need to make MORE!!!!!
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ArticRose Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
yes they are like ferrets... you luv 'em becuase there little weasels and hate them because the bite you...a lot
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
I agree!
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ArticRose Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2007
yeh for more! but the cliff hanger!!!!
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livxuponxhope Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
Lol, don't you love cliff hangers? XD
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ichigo30 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2007
Yay more story
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kingjt13 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007
the 2nd pov dont you mean sasuke??
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